Hi Molly, When I read your poem, I could just imagine the misery of the soldiers in the trenches during a war, especially so in Winter. The picture you choose was a perfect match for your poem, well done Molly! From Mrs J.
Something I especially liked about your presentation of this poem is the sepia background. It makes it look very old. I have always thought that knitted socks might be prickly, but I don't think the soldiers would worry about that in the circumstances! Great work, Molly - keep on with your learning@home!
Hi Molly, sounds pretty grim and dark doesnt it? I agree with Mrs Truman, the sepia background makes it seem very real. Imagine rats running around you in the trenches, you think you could cope with that???!!! Mum
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ReplyDeleteWhen I read your poem, I could just imagine the misery of the soldiers in the trenches during a war, especially so in Winter. The picture you choose was a perfect match for your poem, well done Molly!
From Mrs J.
Kia Ora Molly I like your poem it is very interesting. It is Really good. I like how you have used lots of words from the video.
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Something I especially liked about your presentation of this poem is the sepia background. It makes it look very old. I have always thought that knitted socks might be prickly, but I don't think the soldiers would worry about that in the circumstances!
ReplyDeleteGreat work, Molly - keep on with your learning@home!
Hi Molly, sounds pretty grim and dark doesnt it? I agree with Mrs Truman, the sepia background makes it seem very real. Imagine rats running around you in the trenches, you think you could cope with that???!!! Mum
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