Last week I made this advertisement for Coopers Station. Coopers Station is a horrible place. There is a very mean man that works there. His name is Piggy Bacon.
Kia ora Molly, I am Mrs Sugrue from Karoro School. This advertisement looks fun and friendly and you have tried hard to engage your audience through information and a relaxed font choice. Next time it could be an option to chose key points from your text and make them stand out to the viewer. Overall I can see you have thought hard about what to include and from this I would have no idea it was a horrible place with a very mean man. Well done!
Kia ora Molly, I am Mrs Sugrue from Karoro School. This advertisement looks fun and friendly and you have tried hard to engage your audience through information and a relaxed font choice. Next time it could be an option to chose key points from your text and make them stand out to the viewer. Overall I can see you have thought hard about what to include and from this I would have no idea it was a horrible place with a very mean man. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Mrs Sugrue, Thank you for commenting on my blog. Next time I will try and do that. Thanks.
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